This post is specifically for those lucky few who have been given the first draft of my full length novel "3G2" for comments and edits. Please leave any comments regarding the novel in the comments section below this post. If you have scanned the book with your comments or edits written on the pages, then that can be e-mailed to jonbsouth@gmail.com
Thank you for being a part of this project!
Cuz, about half way through right now. Just starting chapter 25. I love it so far and it is getting better. I am reading it more as a fan right now and will go over it with a more editorial view after that. Question - On page 55, "The anchors had just introduced the Baseball Tonight crew, broadcasting from outside Fenway Park in preparation for game five of the World Series." At this point in the book, shouldn't be game five of the ALCS? Love the camping and yahtzee line! Kate always won! Jeff
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